Desert Dash!

[Karyete]

This level will really test your skills! Enemy fleets.....broken bridges.....burning pipes.....they're all there!

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YoutubeRepeat music with this level:
http://www.youtuberepeat.com/watch/?v=W9MTbdYvy9I
I would appreciate a review

[WindMasterArceus]

I have a rating for you here. I am using the LD Duel format.

Fun: 9/10 - I liked most parts in the level, but there was one point when the way to go was pretty much invisible.

Graphics: 4/10 - There are random plants in the middle of the desert, and considering they aren't cacti, they don't look like they belong there. The coins are really messy, like they were just crammed in the small areas. However, the bullet bills matched the area that they were in (a desert), so that boosts the score a little bit.

Other: 3.5 - There are a couple points that I liked and disliked:
+1.0 You did a good job at secret hiding. I found two points where a small space gave you enough room to get inside.
-0.5 I don't like that you put coins all over the place, where you couldn't get them. They are generally the same coins as mentioned above.

Overall: 15.5/20 This was a great level, and I like your theme. Your decor and aligning should be worked on, as well as the few other points mentioned, but aside from that it's awesome.