Bowser Takes Over

[fish]

Bowser Takes Over
Bowser's airship threatens the Mushroom Kingdom

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[GMDragon11]

Lets review!


FUN:0.5/2The level was too short.And way too easy. Not fun at all. Wait. IM GOING TO MISS THE SCHOOL BUS.

GRAPHICS:1.5/2There was no cutoff.Still not bad.Not lag Just normal.


OTHER:-0.5/1No traveling thourgh earth like you said.-1
Good placed bullet bills +1
No dercation -1

Plain -1
Not lag +1

OVERALL: show

1.5/5

Please fix the level

[Charcoal]

I agree. It's very boring.

...zzz...

[GMDragon11]

SO WHAT YOU NEED TO DO IS.........





EDIT IT AND INPROMVE IT!

Fact: I'm not overreacting about it, I just love Caps when they are on.Plus blinking words

[Charcoal]

@fish: Do you know how to increase your level's size?
I've seen levels made by some people who
almost never increase the size of their level.

[GMDragon11]

He's right.