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Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » October 25th, 2011, 5:56 am

The Rainbow Nightmare
Enjoy! This is my entry for my duel with SMIC in LDD! The theme was dreams. I don't think it'll win, because it was sorta rushed so I could start on my LDC entry, but still, I hope you enjoy it! :D

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Re: The Rainbow Nightmare

Postby MessengerOfDreams » October 26th, 2011, 12:29 pm

Ah! So I wanted to give you some critique to help you, and there's for a reason for that. I think this is a great level, but SMIC's looks like it just might be able to decimate anything in its path if it turns out perfectly. So I'm here to give you a bigger chance to make it. :P

I loved loved loved loved loved loved the color coding for the rooms. It was incredible. It made the level feel trippy and dreamy. That's the biggest asset this level has, it feels like a strange dream. You did things weird and made it feel boundless. SMIC's feels like a dream-set adventure, yours feels like a genuine dream. I zoned out on it big time. xD

Now for points of criticism.

First off, the ending. It was weak. Seeing as SMIC has a ways to go before finishing, I'd advise you to add one more balls-to-the-wall difficult final room to close it off on a strong note. Seeing as it is a color coded level, maybe combining colors would be a good idea? A Rainbow Connection, if you will?

Second off, the red coins are a bad idea. This is a start-finish platformer, and the red coins make it so if you miss something you're f***ed. The red coins add a cool effect, so maybe use a silver star at the end. And maybe connect that silver star to the final challenge that could happen.

Third off, the red bullet bill part was impossible. I couldn't get past it. Seeing as that's the first room, you need to be able to at least get past that easily.

You fix those three points and you'll have a strong contender on your hands.

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Re: The Rainbow Nightmare

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » October 26th, 2011, 12:42 pm

Thank you! :)

I'm really glad you liked it, and yeah the silver star at the end would be a really good idea. And I'll try and make the bullet bills easier to cross. 8-)
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Re: The Rainbow Nightmare

Postby MessengerOfDreams » October 26th, 2011, 12:51 pm

No, the bullet problem was that there were so few bullets I couldn't jump across.
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Re: The Rainbow Nightmare

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » October 26th, 2011, 1:04 pm

Oh lol ... I've edited it now. But hey, the new challenge is that there are two smaller flipping platforms and the bullet bills are shooting downwards in the middle. When I hopefully finish the changes tomorrow, if that's made the challenge even worse, I'll fix it back to how it was before and make more bullet bills shoot out diagonally. Anyway, thanks again! :)
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Re: The Rainbow Nightmare

Postby Charcoal » October 26th, 2011, 1:13 pm

MessengerOfDreams wrote:No, the bullet problem was that there were so few bullets I couldn't jump across.

Yeah that was kinda difficult to get across.

Anyways, pretty good level.
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Re: The Rainbow Nightmare

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » October 27th, 2011, 12:37 pm

♥♥♥♥ I still haven't finished editing it yet ... this is so annoying, this, the LDC, and the halloween LDC to come T_T

Oh well, it must be done! xD
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Re: The Rainbow Nightmare

Postby SuperMIC » October 27th, 2011, 2:56 pm

Ever get those moments in a level when just perfect sprite placing just propels you through the challenge and you feel like such a baws?

That kinda happened for me in the Bill part. I did a triple jump, caught a Bullet Bill, propelled onto the pipe and pressed down. I felt SOOOO Baws XD

Anyway, I really liked it. :O The colour coding was nice, but... DECOR! DECOR MORE DECOR AND FINALLY, DECOR! :troll:

But I shall not let out anything else due to the fact you are my enemy. >:3
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Re: The Rainbow Nightmare

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » October 28th, 2011, 5:52 am

Lol, we always seem to be against each other don't we.. :troll:
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Re: The Rainbow Nightmare

Postby SuperMIC » October 29th, 2011, 10:03 pm

[YourWorstNightmare] wrote:Lol, we always seem to be against each other don't we.. :troll:


It's odd, eh? >:3
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