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Postby MessengerOfDreams » October 29th, 2011, 5:37 pm

Final Moments
Final Moments
Based off of the song "Sail" by AWOLNATION.

Now I'm at an impasse here. I had built this for the requirement of both the 16th LDC and the HalloLDC. I'm not sure if it's good enough for the big leagues of the 16th LDC, and if not, I'll burn it out in the HalloLDC. Tell me what you honestly think!

It also may be a bit laggy or time loady , especially in the third transition. :P Also, it's pretty scary, so be warned.

Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IaZMST-vHfM


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59,964,1,90|30,6059,905,1,90|29,6037,875,1,0|29,6041,923,1,0|29,6016,897,1,90|30,5970,874,1,90|30,5971,820,1,90|8,5972,957,9,1,35,0,1|4,7339,1203|34,5874,649,1,290|33,5915,641,1,0|34,5948,663,1,290|33,6068,667,1,0|34,6036,659,1,300|34,6089,668,1,85|33,6135,613,1,60|33,6166,654,1,45|33,6202,649,1,295|33,6215,597,1,95|33,6326,584,1,0|33,6302,662,1,0|33,6337,529,1,0|34,6285,598,1,285|33,6599,534,1,60|34,6552,574,1,290|33,6632,537,1,295|34,6665,583,1,80|33,6797,564,1,0|32,6834,544,1,315|31,6837,521,1,30|33,6794,520,1,340|32,6771,541,1,85|33,6781,595,1,75|33,6820,625,1,0|33,6946,525,1,345|33,6944,475,1,25|31,6967,503,1,0|33,6987,590,1,50|33,6950,555,1,40|34,6903,538,1,285|33,6964,435,1,20|33,7163,442,1,340|34,7064,452,1,0|33,7186,396,1,90|32,6940,400,1,90|34,7126,264,1,0|33,7030,280,1,325|33,7032,237,1,45|31,6998,292,1,0|31,6996,218,1,0|30,6924,114,1,285|29,6947,103,1,340|30,6844,101,1,110|29,6875,75,1,0|29,6871,100,1,0|29,6853,130,1,0|30,6798,98,1,285|29,6810,67,1,0|30,6738,52,1,0|30,6718,91,1,0|30,6703,127,1,0|29,6738,113,1,300|29,6696,68,1,295|8,6523,80,2,2,50,0,1|30,6600,82,1,295|30,6619,84,1,80|30,6644,82,1,300|30,6438,147,1,80|30,6430,107,1,80|30,6408,104,1,290|30,6388,101,1,75|30,6366,102,1,295|30,6347,140,1,115|30,6236,119,1,0|39,6237,117,4188,1157,1|43,5696,853|104,4451,1865,1,0|111,4851,2135,1,0|109,4708,2013,1,0|108,4759,1998,1,0|108,4823,1994,0,0|110,4890,1973,0,0|104,4546,1866,1,0|111,4502,1845,1,0|112,4920,2026,1,80|110,4297,1789,1,0|109,4380,1863,1,0|107,4201,1777,1,0|103,4332,1853,1,0|101,4632,1925,1,0|124,4588,1896,1,0|124,4409,1892,1,0|135,4525,1909,1,0|135,4474,1907,0,0|112,5066,2027,0,280|11,4985,2075|11,5012,2076|10,4964,2063|10,5031,2065|6,4992,1982|104,5440,2714,1,20|106,5312,2651,1,0|103,4985,2560,1,195|110,4972,2563,1,325|110,5090,1967,1,0|108,5154,1991,1,0|109,5298,2024,1,0|104,5227,2042,1,0|110,5363,2085,1,0|105,5479,2025,1,0|70,5258,2628,1|70,5283,2655,1|70,5188,2573,1|70,5207,2601,1|63,5365,2670,1|63,5557,2733,1|60,5312,2662,1|117,5253,2630,1,0|116,5235,2561,1,0|115,5532,2721,1,0|113,5525,2688,1,0|51,5530,2662,1|43,9632,69|40,10865,3137,12952,1710|39,11918,2307,9801,3001,1|4,9801,3265|4,10032,3762|4,10103,3700|43,11744,2387|74,11835,2360,20|39,5534,3231,9735,3131,1|4,9748,3977|51,10100,3840,1|52,9994,3936,1|52,10214,3719,1|51,10325,3613,1|52,10473,3498,1|56,10561,3402,1|56,10632,3331,1|54,10391,3544,1|60,10520,3444,1|59,10342,3587,1|55,10594,3364,1|70,10692,3274,1|70,10658,3316,1|70,10737,3230,1|70,10810,3159,1|60,10853,3124,1|60,11033,2929,1|57,11086,2861,1|54,11211,2775,1|57,11353,2579,1|57,11593,2303,1|52,10503,3451,1|52,10154,3768,1|51,10057,3874,1|51,9935,3990,1|56,9855,4014,1|55,9767,4013,1|2,10857,3081|2,11155,2799|2,11270,2662|2,11526,2415|4,11873,2306|43,12352,2367|4,12947,2511|4,12950,2261|30,12864,2979,1,0|30,12924,2979,1,0|31,12844,2966,1,0|32,12878,2977,1,0|32,12922,2977,1,0|31,12943,2977,1,0|30,12842,2999,1,330|31,12868,2987,1,0|31,12842,3002,1,0|31,12851,2994,1,0|43,13504,2969|42,13071,3004,1,0|115,13073,2992,0,5|39,13279,3040,13949,2900,1|39,13952,2913,13952,2913,1|123,13910,2897,1,0|124,13983,2879,1,0|123,14077,2854,1,0|121,14161,2747,1,0|124,13644,2879,1,0|126,13803,2919,1,0|6,14665,2368|73,222,541,This%20was%20one%20of%20the%20places%20he%20destroyed%2E%20It%20was%20a%20perfectly%20beautiful%20place%2C%20too%2E%20It%20did%20look%20like%20a%20hungry%20beast%2C%20though%2C%20but%20that%20was%20part%20of%20its%20odd%20charm%2E%0D%0D|73,1611,3584,This%20was%20one%20of%20the%20warships%20he%20used%20to%20destroy%20the%20kingdom%2E%20He%20was%20proud%20of%20them%2E%0D%0DThe%20hills%20were%20his%20insignia%2E%20He%20was%20always%20watching%2E|73,2480,3231,This%20was%20one%20of%20the%20first%20airships%20he%20used%2E%20He%20used%20to%20scrape%20the%20towns%20straight%20out%20of%20their%20roots%2E%20Building%20rubble%20often%20decorated%20the%20outside%2E%20So%20twisted%2E%20|73,3072,2399,He%20took%20this%20sub%20from%20his%20former%20enemy%2E%20In%20the%20end%2C%20it%20ended%20up%20serving%20the%20exact%20same%20purpose%20as%20its%20previous%20owner%2E|73,3761,2686,%3Ci%3EYou%20cannot%20escape%20the%20past%3C%2Fi%3E|73,3761,3199,%3Ci%3EYou%20cannot%20escape%20the%20past%3C%2Fi%3E|73,3759,1888,%3Ci%3EYou%20cannot%20escape%20the%20past%3C%2Fi%3E|73,7969,1089,This%20is%20where%20he%20banished%20his%20brother%2E%20To%20keep%20him%20out%20of%20the%20way%2E%0D%0DHe%20hated%20places%20like%20these%2C%20his%20brother%20did%2E%20That%20was%20why%20he%20was%20put%20here%2E%20So%20his%20brother%20could%20watch%20him%20go%20mad%2E|73,9230,705,This%20was%20what%20the%20inside%20of%20his%20brother%27s%20mind%20started%20making%20out%20of%20the%20inescapable%20place%2E%0D%0DNothing%20seemed%20right%20side%20up%2E%20Never%20again%2E|73,7248,1314,This%20is%20what%20she%20told%20him%20when%20she%20noticed%20him%20changing%20for%20the%20worst%2E%0D%0DThese%20were%20the%20last%20words%20she%20spoke%2E%0D%0DHe%20loved%20her%2E%20When%20she%20said%20those%20words%20he%20no%20longer%20loved%20her%2E|73,6790,1087,The%20only%20sounds%20that%20ever%20came%20out%20of%20her%20mouth%20again%20were%20blood%2Dsmothered%20screams%2E|51,7241,1306,1|56,7030,1341,1|57,7096,1253,1|55,6820,1148,1|60,6934,1174,1|59,6569,1052,1|60,6558,1090,1|56,6710,1100,1|55,6407,983,1|56,6382,890,1|60,6379,812,1|66,6306,1037,1|57,6155,823,1|52,6265,846,1|73,6294,863,This%20is%20what%20he%20was%20told%20many%20times%20in%20many%20ways%2E%0D%0DThe%20orders%20of%20the%20strong%2E%0DThe%20shock%20of%20the%20citizen%2E%0DThe%20pleas%20of%20the%20victim%2E%0D%0DThey%20say%20that%20word%20only%20made%20him%20push%20forward%20faster%2E|51,6043,853,1|57,6025,778,1|52,6075,573,1|51,5914,622,1|73,5929,629,These%20were%20the%20most%20comforting%20words%20to%20his%20twisted%20mind%2E%20He%20savored%20this%20plea%20like%20a%20sweet%20wine%2E%20A%20wine%20made%20of%20the%20people%27s%20blood%2E%20Every%20drop%20of%20blood%20was%20just%20that%20much%20more%20power%20over%20the%20world%2E|67,6159,567,1|67,6451,444,1|67,6450,503,1|54,6615,516,1|54,6787,485,1|56,6918,439,1|2,6679,1059|2,6863,1111|2,6926,1126|73,7316,1252,Those%20who%20crawl%20here%20are%20just%20some%20of%20the%20dead%2E%0D%0DThey%20piloted%20his%20ships%2E%20They%20populated%20the%20cities%2E%20They%20called%20him%20king%2E%20%0D%0DThey%20meant%20nothing%20to%20him%2E|52,7000,422,1|52,7151,423,1|56,7103,237,1|73,6743,47,This%20became%20his%20true%20name%2E%20He%20requested%20they%20call%20him%20by%20it%2E%20He%20needn%27t%20request%20it%2C%20though%2D%20they%20called%20him%20by%20it%20all%20on%20their%20own%2E%0D%0D%0D|73,6261,115,%3Ci%3EWhat%20once%20was%20tame%20became%20wild%0DCold%20blackened%20blood%20no%20longer%20mild%0DWhere%20once%20the%20heroes%20took%20their%20mirth%0Dbegan%20the%20final%20stretch%20of%20Earth%2E%3C%2Fi%3E|4,4193,1769|2,4188,1157|73,4256,1821,This%20is%20where%20he%20used%20to%20live%2E%0D%0DBefore%20power%20became%20his%20mind%27s%20drug%2E%0DBefore%20the%20world%20was%20to%20be%20his%2E%0DBefore%20he%20destroyed%20all%20he%20loved%2E%0D%0DBack%20when%20this%20was%20the%20place%20he%20called%20his%20humble%20home%2E|4,5078,2487|73,5108,2546,This%20is%20where%20he%20used%20to%20live%2E%0D%0DAfter%20it%20all%20came%20crashing%20down%2E%0DForests%20knocked%20down%20by%20his%20own%20hand%2E%0DLava%20flowing%20like%20the%20blood%20of%20the%20damned%2E%0DAfter%20all%20signs%20of%20hope%2E|73,9816,4030,%3Ci%3ENo%20matter%20how%20fast%20thou%20tryeth%20to%20flee%0Dthe%20past%20always%20catcheth%20up%20to%20thee%3C%2Fi%3E|73,12898,2969,This%20is%20the%20last%20place%20on%20Earth%2E%20It%20is%20where%20he%20hides%2C%20waiting%20for%20the%20end%2C%20still%20in%20denial%20of%20what%20he%27s%20done%2E|73,13132,2942,This%20is%20the%20mirror%20in%20which%20the%20reflection%20of%20the%20monster%2C%20the%20murderer%2C%20the%20ruler%2C%20the%20destroyer%2C%20stares%20him%20back%20as%20the%20last%20man%20alive%2E|73,14009,2911,This%20is%20the%20life%20that%20flashes%20before%20his%20eyes%20as%20he%20runs%20off%20of%20the%20last%20place%20on%20Earth%2E|73,14541,2417,%3Ci%3EWhere%20once%20there%20hero%20found%20his%20mirth%0Dis%20where%20he%20ends%20all%20life%20on%20Earth%2E%3C%2Fi%3E~7~15~Final%20Moments%20
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My Most Recent Works: show
I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
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Re: Final Moments

Postby Charcoal » October 30th, 2011, 3:12 pm

Awesome story in that level.
I felt some deep sorrow in my heart.
4/5
The lagging was the only issue.

You should play the song Midna's Lament form Twilight Princess for this level.
In my opinion, it made this level a lot sadder.

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Re: Final Moments

Postby Da Mario » November 18th, 2011, 10:42 pm

Exactly what is the story of this level? I can,t Understand. And you can,t take a Incomplete level to the contest. Why do we die when we take the second shine?
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Re: Final Moments

Postby Charcoal » November 19th, 2011, 4:42 am

@DaMario: If your gonna make a contraction, use an apostrophe (') instead of a comma (,).
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Re: Final Moments

Postby Da Mario » November 19th, 2011, 4:44 am

Ok. Actually The point is i didn't understand much of the story.
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Re: Final Moments

Postby SuperMIC » November 22nd, 2011, 7:43 pm

Da Mario wrote:Ok. Actually The point is i didn't understand much of the story.


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Mario was a very evil guy. He killed his brother and lover. After he was the only human left on Earth (he slaughtered everyone), he came to terms with what he'd done and kept telling himself he never did it. You dieing with the second Shine is the indication of suicide.
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Re: Final Moments

Postby Da Mario » November 23rd, 2011, 2:33 am

SuperMIC wrote:
Da Mario wrote:Ok. Actually The point is i didn't understand much of the story.


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Mario was a very evil guy. He killed his brother and lover. After he was the only human left on Earth (he slaughtered everyone), he came to terms with what he'd done and kept telling himself he never did it. You dieing with the second Shine is the indication of suicide.
Thanks For Telling. Nice story. Well I Recommend Adding a more Sadder song.
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Re: Final Moments

Postby Charcoal » November 23rd, 2011, 2:40 am

Da Mario wrote:Thanks For Telling. Nice story. Well I Recommend Adding a more Sadder song.

Try playing midna's lament and see how that goes.
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