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The End of the Lavalands

PostPosted: November 27th, 2011, 4:03 am
by Karyete
The End of the Lavalands is near! Will you be able to escape? Or will you die in the lava? What is causing the problem?
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Music:
http://www.youtuberepeat.com/watch/?v=0rFWliYeqpo

Re: The End of the Lavalands

PostPosted: April 18th, 2012, 2:10 pm
by WindMasterArceus
I first have to say that your levels generally rate fairly high. Keep up the good work.

Fun: 8.5/10 - Your level had a good theme to it, and definitely kept me on my toes. I don't like one part where you have a door that brings you all the way back to the start. You'd might as well have left us to die. I also don't like an area where reading a sign will get you killed (fairly common among levels) because of the bullet bill launcher that will shoot you when you're done.

Graphics: 4/5 - This level had only one main concern of me for the graphics, and this was the stone and water in the level. Grey stone bricks don't very well fit with the volcano theme, and water is completely the opposite of what is expected in a volcanic level.

Other: 3.5/5
+0.5 Your music fit your theme very well. I can infer that you've heard this before, correct? It is a fiery, action-type theme, so it fits with the action volcano theme, and it give the impression that time is running out. Good job finding this.

Overall: 16/20 - Excellent job on this level. Your environmental design, and the placement of items to make it look like it was falling apart, was awesome. Placement of lava and coins was helpful with the theme.

Re: The End of the Lavalands

PostPosted: April 18th, 2012, 3:56 pm
by GMDragon11
Dude, please read the rules, Arceus. You bumped.(which is replying to a topic which's last post has been longer than a month.) Okay, watch out for that.