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the boss battles:ground spirit 1
calm down the earth spirit by collecting his 5 power stars and inserting them in his pincers

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How the heck do you post those voting things above your levels??

From what I remember of your previous levels, I notice that your grammar and spelling is slightly improving. I'll rate this one.

Fun: 2/5. I have to admit, enemy spam and low-challenge rates are easy to pull off and very low time-consuming, but it does not lead to a good level. The enemies were literally everywhere, and there were no coins at all. Not only that, I found the only Hover Fludd on top of a cloud, tried to get it, and could not because the top screen prevented me from jumping on it. Say, do you ever test your levels completely?

Graphics: 3/5. Ok, I gotta admit, the tile graphics were finely placed. The clouds were where they belonged too. Yet the reason I only gave a 3/5 was because the only decor I saw was the pipes. And that's not really decor either. The level looked completely bare. And where was the boss? I was completely expecting a giant representation of a crab or something with pincers and I only saw this one little hole with a star at the bottom blocked by blocks. Also, cave and jungle tiles do not merge too well together, this made a bit of cut-off.

Creativity: 2/5. I'm afraid the level was rather short. Not only that, enemy spam never works to increase difficulty. Try placing more varieties of gimmicks like gaps or other stuff that may prove challenging. Use your mind instead of randomly placing a ton of bullet bills, skellegoonies, and goombas all over the place. And please make the fludd reachable, as mentioned earlier.

Overall, you got a...
2.1/5! I'm afraid you need much work on this. Try following what I said and you may do better.

EDIT: Looking at the poll above, a 2/5 is not good... The lowest would be 0/5...

DarkBlaze wrote:How the heck do you post those voting things above your levels??

At the bottom, go down till you see "Poll Creation". Then, do your stuff. But, it only works when you're creating a topic.