goomba forest "DEMO"

[koolkid]

goomba forest "DEMO"
jump into the painting and go through the thin forest.warning-dangerously short.

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[Harmless]

Dangerously short... yup, I hear you. Maybe if you disabled the Goombas in the painting it would've made more sense, but otherwise, nothing too special in the level. But nothing bad either, I see a major improvement in this compared to a previous level of yours. That is the great use of Decor.

Being too lazy to give a review currently, I would say that this would be a 3/5 at average. If you expanded it a lot while keeping the lag low via level transitions, this would be great.

Note: I will transform this into a real review and maybe edit some things once it's out of it's Demo stage. These are just some suggestions.

[GMDragon11]

Wow! You've inproved with your graphics! Great job with the graphics. No cutoff. And there were coins, and decoration and all of that.

The level was short I see why. But why was there a cheep-cheep not on water and plus, it's a goomba forest. So, if i'm right, there should be mostly goombas right.


Like Harmless' score, this deserves a 3. Average. If you countine with the graphics and follow these ideas, you may get a good score. But for now. Pretty good!

[Charcoal]

Ugh..You didn't even increase the size of your level.

[Harmless]

Ugh..You didn't even increase the size of your level.

He already said that this was only a demo-stage, and even said himself it would be dangerously short. He may edit it later to be a much more developed level.

But being a demo, I still have to agree this is a little short for one. Nevertheless, it is a good start.