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goomba forest "DEMO"
jump into the painting and go through the thin forest.warning-dangerously short.

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Dangerously short... yup, I hear you. Maybe if you disabled the Goombas in the painting it would've made more sense, but otherwise, nothing too special in the level. But nothing bad either, I see a major improvement in this compared to a previous level of yours. That is the great use of Decor.

Being too lazy to give a review currently, I would say that this would be a 3/5 at average. If you expanded it a lot while keeping the lag low via level transitions, this would be great.

Note: I will transform this into a real review and maybe edit some things once it's out of it's Demo stage. These are just some suggestions.

Wow! You've inproved with your graphics! Great job with the graphics. No cutoff. And there were coins, and decoration and all of that.

The level was short I see why. But why was there a cheep-cheep not on water and plus, it's a goomba forest. So, if i'm right, there should be mostly goombas right.


Like Harmless' score, this deserves a 3. Average. If you countine with the graphics and follow these ideas, you may get a good score. But for now. Pretty good!

Ugh..You didn't even increase the size of your level.

DarkBlaze wrote:Ugh..You didn't even increase the size of your level.

He already said that this was only a demo-stage, and even said himself it would be dangerously short. He may edit it later to be a much more developed level.

But being a demo, I still have to agree this is a little short for one. Nevertheless, it is a good start.