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The Cloudy Gardens

PostPosted: January 13th, 2012, 4:00 pm
by GMDragon11
The Cloudy Gardens
So this is one of my levels that I was able to make in a hour but make a lovely thing outta it. It also happened to me with my Danger Prymaid. I looked at a couple of levels that inspried me to make my level. Enjoy!

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Re: The Cloudy Gardens

PostPosted: January 13th, 2012, 4:13 pm
by BrawlerEX
Good level. I like how you made the snow look like clouds if that's what you wanted

Re: The Cloudy Gardens

PostPosted: January 14th, 2012, 11:19 am
by GMDragon11
brawlerEX wrote: ... if that's what you wanted



Yes I did want it.

Re: The Cloudy Gardens

PostPosted: January 16th, 2012, 1:25 pm
by Harmless
Being too lazy to give a full review, I'll say that this was very enjoyable. I died once, but nice checkpoint there. :P
I think you should've mentioned in the level description if there was Rocket Fludd. But either than that, it was all good except for overuse of foreground tiles to create background (I highly dislike), and that one platform that had a mixture of snow and jungle tiles. It looked like something completely different. :o.o:

Overall, 4/5. Great job.

Re: The Cloudy Gardens

PostPosted: January 19th, 2012, 4:14 pm
by GMDragon11
TheHarmless wrote:...it was all good except for overuse of foreground tiles to create background tiles.


I don't think it's really a problem but still. If you dislike it, that's OK. I just wanted to do that to make the level look better. :)

Re: The Cloudy Gardens

PostPosted: January 21st, 2012, 11:34 pm
by Harmless
If you want to add more flavor in graphics to some areas, simply use decor. There's no such thing as overusing it (unless when you unnecessarily spam it all over the area :P).