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Very interesting level. Short on time, but I'll give a full review.

Fun: 3/5. It was a pretty enjoyable level. Interesting platforming design and I'm actually glad you implemented a cannon in the level. I hardly see those anymore. But however, there are some questioning points.

- I think it's better to have one checkpoint than two. The reason I say this is because it's not just the nature of most Mario games, but I feel like they come too early.

- The Rocket Fludd could've been a bit later in the level. It kinda ruined the earlier platforming ahead.

- I only had to use the Wing Cap's ability to fly once. And it was only for one second. Maybe expand it's use a bit more if you plan on actually using it?

Graphics: 5/5. Wow. Those were some real sharp graphics for a level. The reason is because you actually implemented flawless decor in the level, and your great tile placement. The starting area snow tiles added a nice touch of the cloudy skies. Well done.

Other/Creativity:

Good:
+ I have to mention the starting area snow tiles again. That seriously was a good point, but don't overuse it, or it will end up looking like a snow level (not that you did, I'm just stating some advice). (+1)
+ Absolutely no lag. (+0.5)

Bad:
- The level could've been more expansive. Otherwise, nothing else to say. (-1)

Total: 3.5/5

Overall, you scored a...
3.9/5! That was actually a fairly good level. While there were some minor flaws, it wasn't half bad for a person who's starting to get around here. A suggestion would be to add multiple pathways and red coins/silver stars. Otherwise, good job.

Thanks for the review! By the way, you may have gotten the 1-up at the Wing Cap area, but did you find the other one?