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An Act of Antichesm Pt1(Factory)

PostPosted: May 12th, 2012, 6:42 am
by ~MP3 Amplifier~
An Act of Antichesm Pt1(Factory)
The first part of my entry for the 19th LDC, please comment and review. (unless you're a judge for the LDC) :3

Music --> http://www.youtuberepeat.com/watch?v=M3XsBqB61a8

This, IMO, outlines the mystery of the level and the anxiety that Mario should have while entering the factory.


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Re: An Act of Antichesm Pt1(Factory)

PostPosted: December 24th, 2012, 11:28 am
by Volkove
Oh hey, long overdue review.

In terms of gameplay, the waiting period at the start is a bit unnecessary, especially since said soul(?) isn't visible from the start. Beyond that, it is fairly calm and straight forward, but still interesting enough that one won't get bored easily. The focus lies primarily with the story / atmosphere, though, which is clear enough. Some of the elements regarding the unique moving block patterns tend to jump out the most in this regard, although I wonder if there are possible bugginess issues if they happen to drag the player into the wall or something of the sort. It never really came up, fortunately, but still.

Graphically, it is quite interesting. The cave/wooden tile combinations at the start work quite well, for example, and the pipe fragments & other brick structures mixed within work well. Interesting 'blinding light' effect as well.
I don't like the checkerboarded wire tiles near the start, though; especially placed in such a haphazard manner, they don't really fit the structure that a factory should possess. Also, it seems to use some items excessively in some instances, the most prominent being within the bottom route. Some obstacles, like the random pendulum, just seem wierd (unless it is meant to be a metaphorical representation of time's passing based off the nearby sign, but even that is a stretch), and the end of said bottom passage goes a bit heavy on the trees, which contrast too sharply with the rest of the level.
I'm still not sure what the orange X-ish thing at the end of the level is meant to be either.

For a few miscellaneous notes, I don't see why many blue coins have to be in areas that are difficult to impossible to reach. In the top path, the platforms fade way too quickly, so if you try to jump for it, you will just suffer massive damage. Baiting the player on purpose seems like a low move. Likewise, at the end of the bottom path, a blue coin is set atop a pair of rocks, the space much too small to reach.

Also, while it isn't noteworthy, relying on player faith to not proceed before getting the 2 red coins isn't a good move. Why not just allow for a way to go back if they didn't get the coins?

Regarding the signs, there is an overuse of ellipses (aka ...), and while they are good for demonstrating hesitance and the like, they lose their impact if used too frequently. What the signs actually portray is confusing as well, for it switches between the thoughts of the player, what I assume are just random signs and... um, some unknown being speaking to the player? It is rather odd.

Overall, an issue might be that there is an awful lot of ambiguity in the level, since many of the concepts within are difficult to accurately portray. This can be a strength in some ways, I suppose, but being too vague can become a problem when dealing with such a complex theme.

I suppose that should do it for now. Will get to the other two soon.

Re: An Act of Antichesm Pt1(Factory)

PostPosted: December 24th, 2012, 11:42 am
by ~MP3 Amplifier~
Ohai, thanks Volcove. :P

Don't worry about the review for the third level, that was the death figure really and there is hardly anything in it. :3

Re: An Act of Antichesm Pt1(Factory)

PostPosted: December 24th, 2012, 3:07 pm
by Harmless
Oh, this level... Ahh, memories of playing this and giving it quite the praise for a nice story. Also, graphical designs went well. This was quite memorable. :D