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Posted: **May 19th, 2012, 1:15 pm**

Arctic Lava
A Meteor hits an Arctic Town and Mario learns about it.

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Posted: **May 19th, 2012, 4:30 pm**

Reveiw!

Fun: 4.5/10
Sorry, I don't like sign levels. And that's quite sad because I think that the good gameplay is actually on the plataforming, the little there is. I really didn't care about how the shy guy's great great grand father died, if you are making a sign level, at least make a good storyline. Make the characters interact with each other! Add good dialogue! The level is also WAY too short for my taste. I really felt that the level had so so much potential (My expectations went really high when I watched the right beggining of the level, the I felt down). The silver stars are pointless. My hints: focus more on the plataforming, add A COUPLE of real enemies (not characters, enemies) and improve a bit your dialogue. I think you are good on making plataforming, work a lot on it.

Graphics: 1.5/5
Again, my expectations fell through the level. I looked at the first piece of plataforming (AKA: the mountain with the ice pieces) and I though the level might be well designed, I was wrong. The door sistem was horrible, why you can see the inside of the house from outside? Put a transition! And the door is more like a teleporter. There's some serious cut-off at the end (before the last house, when you start to use the snow titles again), but that's the only part of the level where I noticed. The houses were OK, but try adding walls (either castle or mansion) to make them look better. Also, I would recomend you to use more snow trees and rocks.

Other: 2,5-0,5+0,5+0,5=2,75
Good level idea: 0,5
1-up bonus: 0,25
Boring signs: -0,5

OVERALL: 10/20=2,5/5
This level requires some real improvement. Try to do what I said above. Again, I think this level (and you

) have lots of potential, I don't like to see that potential lost. Work on it. That's the key.

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