Fire Tower

[-BY]

Fire Tower
This is my first level. Please rate fairly

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[Asterocrat]

Now let me comment on that.

Let's put apart the difficulty, but that's just me because I'm a bad gamer and proud of it :3 But seriously, that level left me in awe. Well certainly it lacks some graphics and stuff like that. But you used all this Fire Towers in a more clever way that just normal flames, and you made lasers and really good stuff. Including that crazy circle thing at the end, and the fire-splitting Boos at the very end were clever too.

For a first level, that is excellent. With ideas like that, you end well, just fix a bit your graphics :3

This surely deserves a 4/5, but it may need (once again) some fixes to get the perfect 5.

But really, I'm looking forward to some new levels from you.

~Star king

[lordpat]

Review!

Fun: 9/10
I've rearly seen a level so enjoyable. This level focuses on fun and challenge, and both were incredibly good. The use of flamethrowers was so good I bearly noticed how much you overused them . Still, I love the plattaforming, it's excelent. One main problem, the whole thwomp thing...I didn't like it. I thought it was a little bit dumb.

Graphics: 3.2/5
As Star pointed out, this is the weakest part of the level. It wasn't really that weak though. The use of flamethwrowers as lasers was really clever and you also used disabling really well (Is this really your first level?). But, the lack of decoration and color of the level hits me quite a bit. I think you're smart enough to come up with a solution from yourself.

Other: 2,5+2-0,25=4/5
Very original +1
No lagg +0,5
Greatly implemented items +0,5
1-up bonus +0,25
The title wasn't all that original (call me picky) -0,25

Overall:
16/20=4/5 (yeah!)
I think I'm really glad of seeing a really good level coming from a new designer. You have style, and even though you need to work on some minor details, yet still, I apllaud you. Keep up the good work.

Oh! And work on your level! (No matter how good you are, your levels can always be better!)

[-BY]

Thank you for the tips When I am be upright this was my second level but in the first I have test the items, tiles and enemies.
(It wasn't very good).
And I hadn't observe on the graphics.
I don't know it before.
But my next level will be better.

[Yoshi27]

Really fun level for a first-time user. I liked the Lava "Lasers" the most. The thing I didn't like was the difficulty but still I rate it a 9.5 out of 10

[-BY]

I need to admit that I've no clue how people keep digging out older levels of mine.
However. I'm not sure if your "first-time-user", relates to the fact that it's been my first posted level back then, or if you think that I'm a newbie still. If you've been going for the latter one. I hope I'm none anymore.

Still. Thanks for the comment. (It's a shame that my first level got on the level list after all.)