DARK LEVEL PART 2

[FRANCESCO]

DARK LEVEL PART 2
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[-BY]

Hello FRANCESCO. I will try to comment your level professionally

FUN: 4/10

The level was sometimes enjoyable. Example: Stars were used well and sensible and the enemies have good positions.
BUT the doors to the death or to the start in the WHOLE Level were frustrating and maybe it is my fault but I don't reach the shine sprite because a flying door I can't go in. Please fix that when it isn't my fault.

Graphics:3/5
We are both starter and I have made the same error. (Maybe a bit bigger than you.)
And I can give you the same advice that was given to me. Set more details and decoration in your levels. Than it would be better.

Other:
door traps are overused -0.5
some items and enemies was used good +0,5
Title was already OK. +0.25


Overall:10/20=3/5
You are a newcomer so I will give you 0.25 for 10 points in the end.
You have many to fix but I think the level can be well if you take out the frustrating parts.
This was my first level replie so I hope it is Ok.

[lordpat]

Hello FRANCESCO. I will try to comment your level professionally

FUN: 4/10

The level was sometimes enjoyable. Example: Stars were used well and sensible and the enemies have good positions.
BUT the doors to the death or to the start in the WHOLE Level were frustrating and maybe it is my fault but I don't reach the shine sprite because a flying door I can't go in. Please fix that when it isn't my fault.

Graphics:3/5
We are both starter and I have made the same error. (Maybe a bit bigger than you.)
And I can give you the same advice that was given to me. Set more details and decoration in your levels. Than it would be better.

Other:
door traps are overused -0.5
some items and enemies was used good +0,5
Title was already OK. +0.25


Overall:10/20=3/5
You are a newcomer so I will give you 0.25 for 10 points in the end.
You have many to fix but I think the level can be well if you take out the frustrating parts.
This was my first level replie so I hope it is Ok.

No, it's not Ok. To review you must be DESTRUCTIVE, show no mercy! (Just kidding )


About the level....I couldn't play it. I have a fast computer, but still it lagged the HELL out of me. Add leveltransitions to reduce lagg. That is VERY important when you make a long level. If you fix it (edit this post), I would love to try the level.
Still, the few I played was incredibly frustraiting.