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The Missing Shine Sprite

PostPosted: May 25th, 2012, 9:37 am
by -BY
The Missing Shine Sprite
With the advices of some level designers. I have been able to create a hopefully better level.
Any comments are welcome.

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Re: The Missing Shine Sprite

PostPosted: May 25th, 2012, 10:44 am
by MessengerOfDreams
You are, I swear, one of the better level designers I have seen in a long time. Your graphics were excellent, your gameplay was great (I wasn't a huge fan of the shine trap normally but you actually pulled it off well here) and the secret was epic as well. Very good job.

Re: The Missing Shine Sprite

PostPosted: May 25th, 2012, 10:46 am
by ~MP3 Amplifier~
^-- What MoD said. I have no regrets in approving this level whatsoever, you are definitely one of the better newcomer level designers I've ever seen. Keep up the good work, and when you get the chance, enter an LDC. ;)

Re: The Missing Shine Sprite

PostPosted: May 25th, 2012, 12:40 pm
by GMDragon11
Oh god, Amazing. This is one of the best levels I've seen in this portal. It's kinda short, but the graphics are amazing! Bravo. You deserve a 4.5/5 = 5/5! Thank you! You're an amazing newcomer, you should enter the 20thLDC. I'm sure you'll do good! :D

Re: The Missing Shine Sprite

PostPosted: May 25th, 2012, 5:16 pm
by Harmless
Wow.

From what I'm seeing... I have a pretty big urge to try this level after dinner and a quartet rehearsal. :awe:

Re: The Missing Shine Sprite

PostPosted: May 25th, 2012, 6:46 pm
by SuperMIC
...That, for a newbie LDer.... was indeed very good. 4/5 for length of the level, but that was awesome.

Re: The Missing Shine Sprite

PostPosted: May 25th, 2012, 10:08 pm
by Asterocrat
Magnificent. A Legend is born.

So... this is your third level?

...

Well...

5/5.

Dude, you have to try the LDC.

Re: The Missing Shine Sprite

PostPosted: May 25th, 2012, 10:53 pm
by -BY
Thanks a lot for the compliments. I am very happy that all enjoying my level.
But one thing is a bit strange. The person who have give me 1 star should please explain what is not so well in the level.

Re: The Missing Shine Sprite

PostPosted: May 26th, 2012, 2:54 am
by GMDragon11
I'm sure it's a downrater. Don't worry, it always happens. :D

Re: The Missing Shine Sprite

PostPosted: May 26th, 2012, 3:03 am
by ~MP3 Amplifier~
Don't get put down by downraters, they just vote your level really low because they're jealous that they can't do the same.

Well, that's ridiculous, anyone can be a good designer if they put in the effort and work at it. Anyways, yeah. :P
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