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Volcano Maze Edited
This one was made by me nd my cousin made the other one. I finally edited it so it's more possible to finish.

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Downrater alert! Lemons! Do what you must do!

Review:
Fun: 7.2/10
Yep. This one is better. The good use of fire columns and thwomps is here. Well done. I think you put a little bit too many skellegonies, but nothing to serious. Still, the part of the horizontal fire column... you really want me to jump at the fire? I don't like that. The red coin challange was overall well put together, so points for that. I think I actually liked the thwomp part (the one with the falling logs) more in the original. That part here was...annoying.

Graphics: 2.7/5
As I said before, decorating a volcano is no easy task. I must say that the coins did help to make the level look a bit better. The title placing could be a little bit better. Not really too much to say.

Other: 2,5-2,5+2,5=2,5
Well placed coins +0,5
1-up bonus +0,25
No lagg +0,5
Lack of originality -0,5
Overuse of skellegonies -0,25

Overall: 11/20=3/5
Bravo. I've seen a progress (even though it was made by your cousin. Work on above (try to be a little bit more original) and this level will better. Overall, a good level.