Dark jungle galaxy

[lordpat]

Dark jungle galaxy
Wow, so finally I made a good level in the new portal (or at least to me). Please review and be fair with your ratings!
Star 1: Winy viny trouble.
Star 2: Slippery clouds.
Star 3: Right below us.

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[-BY]

What did you say about rating? Oh, yes you said "No mercy". Or I should be maybe a bit sarcastic?

But I won't be resentful.

It was a really great level. It makes fun also when I tried the cloud shine sprite 17 times (Yes I count.)
(I must be a better gamer.)
There was more decoration than level and the vine idea was quite new. I haven't seen it before.

All together I would give you 4.75/5.( Because the clouds have bully me.)
It's very nice that I was commented by such a great leveldesigner. I haven't know it before.

[lordpat]

What did you say about rating? Oh, yes you said "No mercy". Or I should be maybe a bit sarcastic?

But I won't be resentful.

It was a really great level. It makes fun also when I tried the cloud shine sprite 17 times (Yes I count.)
(I must be a better gamer.)
There was more decoration than level and the vine idea was quite new. I haven't seen it before.

All together I would give you 4.75/5.( Because the clouds have bully me.)
It's very nice that I was commented by such a great leveldesigner. I haven't know it before.

You're commented by Star King, that's something good. Anyway, thanks for your support. (BTW, I was never able to pass the cloud part)

[Harmless]

^ He was commented by MoD, even ♥♥♥♥ better.

[GMDragon11]

I'll review it.



FUN: 9/10 This level is pretty fun! I liked it alot. But it was kinda short if you ask me. If this could be just a bit longer, it's a 10/10. But I love levels with more than one shine. Pretty cool if you ask me. Great job!


GRAPHICS: 5/5 These graphics are amazing! I love it. Perfect. And the wicked part is.... no lag! Normally, levels with these great graphics lag alot! You sir, made my day!

OTHER: 3/5
+1 No lag
-1 Clouds are too slippery

TOTAL: 17/20 = 4.7/5 = 5/5 This level is very good! You made my day sir. I can't wait to see more of your levels!

[lordpat]

I hear lots of people complaining about how slippery the clouds are. I'll edit it to make them less slippery. Thanks for the advices.

[BrawlerEX]

Dark jungle galaxy
Review

FUN
7.75/10
Although some parts were repetitive and the platforming was really simple the level was a pretty enjoyable one. I would suggest to add more unique parts and mix it up once in a while. One of the downfalls was that the level was short even for a three way level. This did make me a little unhappy towards the end.

Graphics
4.35/5
The graphics in the level were amazing. I do suggest a wider variety of tiles since it is a small level. Don't use too many but just don't leave Grass by itself. The item section had great placement though. The graphics in here were a really nice touch.

OTHER
3.35/5

+0.5 Like the three way shines
-0.15 The clouds did get annoying


OVERALL
15.45/20

[KABOOM]

Funny, I didn't have much trouble with the clouds at all. I had more trouble with the vines than with the clouds. But this is an awesome level either way and it deserves a 5/5 from me.

[YumaMan9]

A little short but other than that it's awesome!


5/5 stars!