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lordpat wrote:Review.

FUN: 8/10
The level was challenging, and had some really good ideas into it. Some stuff were a bit off place, and there was a strange glitch when you had to enter the door inside the piramyd. Overall, good plattaforming. The bullet part was a bit too excesive but it was fine.

Graphics: 4/5
Bravo. Great job. The desert looked really good. Keep up the good work! The pyramid inside's weren't all that good, but not too bad. I would recomnd using the wall titles (bricks) rather than the clock title (other), it looks better in this situation. There was a room floating in the sky, but the level design was really intresting so....

Other: 2,5+1,25-0,5= 3.75/5
-No indication of how many Silver Stars were needed to beat the level. -0,5
-Good use of signs. +0,25
-Little lag, but nothing to worry about. =0
-Coins and 1-ups +0,5
-Some original well implemented ideas: +0,5
-Lordpat's special gift for effort: +0,5

Overall: 4/5
The level was great, some minor mistakes, but hell, you have lots of potential.