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Review.

Fun: 4.5/10
A meh level I must say. It was very easy and there was no sort of challange whatsoever, and thereofore there was no satisfaction in getting the shine sprite. The platforming is very basic and could have been done better. How about adding some lava? Or some fire-towers? That sounds good, doesn't it? You should also incrase your level size to make the level longer and just better. I

Graphics: 2.5/5
Even though they are consistent, some of the graphics could have been improved a lot. It feels bland (try adding some trees, pictures, windows, or anything from your imagination) and repetitive. But not too bad. No cut-off.

Other: 2,5-0,5+0,5=2,5
No originality: -0,5
No lag or loading time: +0,5

Overall: 9.5/20=>2.4/5
Even though the rating wasn't vey high, I think you can do a lot better. I trust in you.