Sky Brigade (Alchemy)

[Center_Mass]

Sky Brigade (Alchemy)
Hello guys Im a new player here so I figured Id test this game out Im not really sure what the standards are for a good level so I hope this pleases you and PM me if you'd like to see more. Have fun
(and just for the person by the name of: Messenger of darkness I'd like to be a MOD

Sorry, the embedded player is not working just yet, please use the Popup link to open the level in a new window.

Show | Hide | Popup

Code: Select all

82x42~0*27*9L9M0*4*4t4x*8*0*27*9L9M0*4*4t9<98*7*0*27*9L9M0*4*4t9=99*7*0*27*9L9M*5*4t4x*8*0*27*9L9M0*4*4t4x4z09=99*4*0*27*9L9M0*5*4t*8*0*27*9L9M0*7*9L09M0*30*9L9M0*7*9L09M0*30*9L9M0*7*9L09M0*30*9L9M0*7*9L09M0*27*4t*18*0*24*4t4x*7*9<98*3*4x*6*0*24*4t9<98*16*0*24*4t9=99*16*0*24*4t4x*7*9=99*3*4x*6*0*24*4t*18*0*25*8<4t4x4z0*38*8<4t4z0*39*8<4t0*36*9L9M*3*8<4t0*36*9L9M0*2*8<4t0*36*9L9M0*2*8<4t4y0*35*9L9M04t*3*4x4y0*34*9L9M04t9L9M*3*9V9U9W9U9W9U9W9U9W9U9W9U9W0*21*9L9M04t*3*4x4z0*34*9L9M0*2*8<4t4z0*35*9L9M0*2*8<4t0*36*9L9M*3*8<4t0*36*9L9M0*2*8<4t0*36*9L9M0*2*8<4t0*27*4t*2*0*7*9L9M0*2*8<4t4y0*26*4t*3*0*6*9L9M04t*3*4x4y0*25*4t4x4t*2*0*5*9L9M4t*7*9V9U9W9U9W9U4t*6*0*12*4t4x*2*4t*2*0*4*9L9M4t3q0*3*4y4t4x*12*0*12*4t4x*3*4t0*4*4t4x4t0*5*4t9<98*11*0*12*4t*5*9L9M*3*0*2*4t0*5*4t9;97*11*0*12*4t9M*3*4t9L0*3*4t4x4t0*5*4t9=99*11*0*12*4t9M*3*4t9L0*5*4t3p0*3*4z4t4x*12*0*12*4t9M*2*4t*2*9L9M*3*4t4x4t*7*9V9U9W9U9W9U4t*6*0*12*4t*4*4z0*6*4t4x4t4z0*35*4t4x*2*4t*2*4z0*39*4t4z0*36*4t4x*3*4t0*37*4t4u*3*0*38*4t*2*4x4z0*38*9d4t4z0*39*9d4t0*37*4t9L9M9d4t4y0*36*4t9L9M4t*2*4x4y0*35*4t9L9M4t4u*3*0*19*9d*15*04t9L9M9d*23*0*97*4t*4*9S*2*4t*14*0*22*4t9L9M9L9S*2*4t*14*0*22*4t9L9M9L9S*2*4t*15*0*21*4t9L9M9L9S*2*4t*14*0*22*4t9L9M9L*3*4t*14*0*22*4t9L9M*3*9L4t*14*0*22*4t9L*3*9M9L4t*14*0*22*4t9S*2*9L9M9L4t*14*0*22*4t9S*2*9L9M*2*4t*14*0*22*4t9S*2*9L9M9L4t*14*0*22*4t9S*2*9L9M9L4t*14*0*22*4t9L*3*9M4t*15*0*22*4t9M*4*9L4t*14*0*22*4t9L*5*4t*14*0*22*4t9S*4*4t*15*0*22*4t*20*0*41*4t0*555*~1,3,997,0,0,Right|41,139,1057,1,45|41,136,1054,1,45|41,133,1051,1,45|41,130,1048,1,45|41,127,1045,1,45|114,188,1120,1,90|114,243,1120,1,90|114,287,1117,0,90|114,187,1217,1,90|114,229,1217,0,95|114,283,1219,0,90|9,224,1457,0,9,0,90,0,0,Left,Up,0.5,32,7,Left,,,1|144,156,1169,1,90|144,292,1169,1,270|145,19,1028,1,0|144,94,1028,1,0|145,343,740,1,0|145,423,740,1,0|45,584,764,90,1,220,-1,-1,0,0,0|73,443,734,This%20is%20yes%20regular%20lava%20but%20we%27ve%20slightly%20reduced%20it%27s%20effects%20so%20you%20can%20last%20slightly%20longer%20in%20it%2E|144,692,741,1,0|144,731,741,1,0|144,741,741,1,0|4,692,720|4,692,699|73,728,735,This%20is%20just%20regular%20lava%2E%2E%2E|4,978,723|4,977,701|73,52,1024,before%20we%20get%20started%20we%27d%20like%20to%20show%20you%20a%20tour%20of%20our%20rather%20strange%20facility|9,1105,811,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,80,12,Left,3,0,1|119,1028,751,1,0|119,1181,751,0,0|119,1027,882,0,180|119,1181,881,1,180|114,1168,836,1,0|114,1169,796,0,5|114,1041,837,0,0|114,1039,785,1,350|114,1084,883,1,90|114,1129,883,0,95|114,1082,754,1,90|114,1138,753,0,95|45,1104,656,0,100,100,64,92,0,0,0|28,1103,645,1,0|28,1168,645,1,0|45,1168,656,0,100,100,64,92,0,0,0|28,1232,632,1,325|28,1296,599,1,325|45,1232,648,0,100,120,64,92,0,0,0|45,1294,632,0,100,150,64,92,0,0,0|18,1135,431,2,0|18,1135,431,2,25|18,1135,431,2,50|18,1135,431,2,75|18,1135,431,2,100|18,1135,431,2,130|18,1135,431,2,155|18,1023,461,-3,0|18,1023,461,-3,35|18,1023,461,-3,70|18,1024,461,-3,105|18,1023,461,-3,140|145,1043,708,1,0|144,977,740,1,0|145,1107,506,1,0|144,1172,506,1,0|144,1202,506,1,0|73,1016,708,This%20is%20our%20power%20source%20right%20here%20it%20powers%20the%20ship%20the%20lights%2E%2E%2E%20the%20horrid%20plumbing%2E%0D%0Dand%20the%20blades%20that%20spin%20to%20keep%20us%20hovering|41,1364,624,1,0|41,1360,624,1,0|41,1355,624,1,0|41,1350,624,1,0|41,1346,624,1,0|41,1341,624,1,0|41,1336,624,1,0|41,1333,624,1,0|41,1553,624,1,0|41,1548,624,1,0|41,1543,624,1,0|41,1538,624,1,0|41,1539,624,1,0|41,1534,624,1,0|41,1528,624,1,0|41,1528,624,1,0|41,1530,624,1,0|41,1526,624,1,0|43,1632,540|114,2110,574,1,0|114,2108,574,1,0|114,2106,574,1,0|114,2104,574,1,0|114,2105,574,1,0|114,2103,574,1,0|114,2101,574,1,0|114,2100,574,1,0|114,2099,574,1,0|114,2097,574,1,0|114,2096,574,1,0|114,2095,574,1,0|114,2093,574,1,0|114,2092,574,1,0|114,2090,574,1,0|114,2088,574,1,0|114,2086,574,1,0|114,2085,574,1,0|114,2084,574,1,0|114,2083,574,1,0|114,2081,574,1,0|114,2080,574,1,0|114,2078,574,1,0|114,2076,574,1,0|114,2074,574,1,0|114,2072,574,1,0|114,2071,574,1,0|114,2070,574,1,0|114,2069,574,1,0|114,2067,574,1,0|114,2065,574,1,0|114,2062,574,1,0|114,2064,574,1,0|114,2063,574,1,0|114,2061,574,1,0|114,2060,574,1,0|114,2058,574,1,0|114,2057,574,1,0|114,2055,574,1,0|114,2054,574,1,0|114,2052,574,1,0|114,2050,574,1,0|114,2048,574,1,0|114,2046,574,1,0|114,2045,574,1,0|114,2043,574,1,0|114,2042,574,1,0|114,2040,574,1,0|6,2073,450|67,1824,493,1|67,378,637,1|67,37,920,1|67,1003,569,1|73,1865,574,This%20is%20what%20you%27ll%20be%20testing%20our%20scientists%20have%20been%20tinkering%20with%20dimnensions%20and%20they%20stumbled%20upon%20this%0D%0D%3Cb%3ETo%20be%20continued%2E%2E%2E%3C%2Fb%3E%20hopefully~7~4~Sky%20Brigade%20%28Alchemy%29

[-BY]

Good level.

We look for fun, graphics and others (like loading time, lag, awesome things, or that do I: look for new things and inventions). Your level is only too short. But I like it. I'm too lazy for a review, but I think it could be awesome when you make it longer.
Keep up the good work.

Between. His name is MessengerOfDreams. Not MessengerOfDarkness.

[lordpat]

If you wanna be a moderator, just wait until a spot comes on. Don't ask for it randomly, that really piss them off.

Anyway, Review.

Fun: 6/10
It feels a bit more of a showcase rather than a real level. The block challange was pointless, and I really didn't get what the whole lava thing was. The level was also too short and lacks of develeopment. However, there was some enojyment into it. Like in those signs, for example. Now, to the showcase, some intresting ideas, but none of them really developed.

Graphics: 4/5
A very nice title combination, and even though it feels empty at times, it looks good. A nice construction. Some ideas were very oringinal.....but not so good, like all those mush-rooms parts. What did they mean?

Other: 3+1=4/5
+0,5:No lag/loading time
+0,5: intresting ideas overall.

Overall: 14/20. (3.5/5->4/5 because you are new)
A good level indeed, some things (particularly in the FUN section) that need improovement. I can get it being a bit of an introductory level and a showcase. Anyway, it was a nice level and I'm looking foward to the next part

This is how my reviews usually look like. Some people complain a bit more than others, but this 3 categories are the official rating sistem.

[KABOOM]

You have plenty of potential to be a great level designer. I suggest making a longer, harder, and more fun level, though. This was very short.