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Adventure...ON ICE!

PostPosted: July 22nd, 2012, 12:32 am
by 1018peter
Adventure...ON ICE!
It's a intro of a big threat...

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Super Mario 63
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Re: Adventure...ON ICE!

PostPosted: July 23rd, 2012, 4:16 am
by lordpat
Review.

Fun:
The level was pretty basic in what respects to plattaforming, but it is hard to say it wasn't fun at all. The level was very short and quite easy for me(and I suck as a player). The signs were pretty much Ok. The level being so short, it kinda took away all the challange. Score: 6/10

Graphics:
Now, an intresting mix of titles, which I like a lot. The Ice combined with the grey bricks seemed great, and so did the big tree. But the house is out of place.Why not adding a level transition and put it on the other side? Why there are no walls? Overall, solid graphics: 3/5

Other:
Em....sorry....I can't think of anything good or bad. I'll leave you a 3/5

Overall: 12/20 (3 stars)
A strong start to the series, it's very sad when people make introductions and make them very short. Even if it is an introduction,make it longer! More intresting! Or just start with the first. I think I'll play the rest of your levels, good job ;)

Re: Adventure...ON ICE!

PostPosted: July 27th, 2012, 1:45 pm
by Gardelario
Its a great level!