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Mario's Revenge on Bowser Pt 2!
Mario has reached Bowser's Castle, but he has trouble progressing! Can you help him?

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The level is ok but too short again.
Try to make a bigger level. Like 300x30 for the beginning.
The lava in the grass tiles looked a bit strange. And when someone fall down behind the switch he can't go up and must start the level again. Many bullies make the level not really harder. Try to put more platforming in your levels and it should become better. How about using power ups like wing caps or invisible stars?

Seconding BlackYoshi's words, the level should be a little longer and there should be a kind of a platform next to the switch to prevent falling.

Overall, 4/5 :3