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Cyan Jungle
I'm redumping my level series, Mario Whirlpool Travel.
3-1 Cyan Jungle. It may lag, because this level is pretty long. Actually, it's longest and best
level I've made in level designer, in my opinion. Good luck and I hope you like it!

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I really liked this level series? . The only problem I have with it is that everything is too original (These levels are much better than some of the other levels I've seen on the portal ) but to make it a bit better try to experiment and implement some new ideas that can really help other players (And I didn't really get the story line) Overrall some great levels

The storyline is incredibly simple. Mario goes to Whirlpool Island for vacation, and decides to climb up the "High Mountain" but sees Bowser's minions there. Mario decides to check the matter, and in result, he accidentally gets himself into trouble by taking the lost Shine Sprite on his way. Every time Mario takes a Shine Sprite, it takes him to unknown place for him, so Mario keeps collecting Shine Sprites until it takes him home.

That explains it so much better (but take what i said to mind)

Just to say, you need to use more level transitions. That's why the level lags so much.

In general the level is quite good, however many things could be improved. The structure for example. It goes all in one direction, and doesn't really vary its paths. Platforming is very simple, and the tiling is quite plain, rather than interesting and unusually shaped. But yes, there's no cut-off and the décor is at a good balance. And while the platforming is simple, it does show understanding of the items in the level designer.

I'll give this a 3/5.