The House 2

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The House 2
The house 2: The second star

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[CedarBranch]

Fun: 4/4
You've done it again! Another level that I enjoyed! I liked it so much that when I returned to the beginning because of a missed item, it was just as fun as the first run! Keep up the FUN work!

Graphics: 1.75/4
You are making improvements graphically. The theme seemed to help you get away with placing trees covered with snow, and there're no big problems. May I suggest making things neater by holding the "ctrl" key on your keyboard while placing items? That would earn you a MUCH higher score! Still, at times the displacements were easier to ignore because of the fun! Also, I think it's a bit "odd" how you place you name somewhere in all your levels (you've made so far). I won't take points off for that, but I would only do it in a level or two (which you've done). But if it is something you want to put in your levels, then go ahead. I'm not stopping you.

Other: 1/2
-.5: Misplacing some items.
+.5: Explaining that the Shine Sprite in the other house helped you get out!

Overall: 6.75/10 (3.375 > 3 Stars)
I thought you've done much better than before. The way you made the house float didn't bite me nor you! The graphics improved, it was a bit more fun than before, and you got more "other" and "graphic" points from me this time. Even though you got three stars again, your precise score here was higher. I would like to see more houses from you, but give the "ctrl" key a try next time!