Gold Mine

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Gold Mine
This is my first level. Please rate fairly.

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[-BY]

Nice to see finally your level. You should (like I said already) work on your gameplay. But it is your first level. So. 4/5.

[blueMario2000]

its a got level the lores are goodideas

[lordpat]

Review.

Fun: 6.5/10
It was a fun level, I liked the kart plattaforming for example, although some areas with too many enemies were a bit dull. I would add a couple of flying shy guys or flying koopas in the kart tracks to make it a bit more chalenging, and take down some enemies in some areas, like the one full of shy guys. The last section (towards the end of the level) was also a bit lacky, maybe you can add another kart or something kewl. But for a first level, I'm impressed.

Graphics: 4/5
The leve looked pretty good. I liked the tiling, and the shine sprites with the glass. Very nice! Sometimes the decor is a bit lacky, but nothing serious.

Other: 3.5/5
+0,5: GO KARTS!
+0,5: Bravo for a first level.
-0,5: Once you get passed the second level transition, a strange glitch happened, it was like the screen was flashin. I dunno.

14/20
Wow, just wow. Just for you to know, I'm a very strict judge. Reaching a 14/20 is far from easy, but man, in your first level? Really well done. I should rate you 3 stars, but I'll give you 4!