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sun quest 4-1

PostPosted: September 13th, 2012, 3:00 pm
by blazeron1
sun quest 4-1
you are dropped of of the ship and land here where bowser has a surprise

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Re: sun quest 4-1

PostPosted: September 13th, 2012, 3:14 pm
by lordpat
Ok about this level...

I can say something: this level shows that you have the ability of creating something good, but you this level was not good itself. In terms of gameplay, the level got dull and repetitive rather quickly. The fire tower abuse made it incredibly annoying to know where to land, I would recommend you to trully cut the ammount of fire towers, and maybe angle them just a bit to make a better effect. There was a lack of decor at the beginning of the level too, and some enemy spam at the end. However, I did like the penguin cabin all destroyed.

Overall, it wasn't a good level. However, I can see some ideas and tricks not too bad executed. Just for that a 2/5 for you.

With love,

~lordpat

Re: sun quest 4-1

PostPosted: September 13th, 2012, 3:28 pm
by lordpat
Ok about this level...

I can say something: this level shows that you have the ability of creating something good, but you this level was not good itself. In terms of gameplay, the level got dull and repetitive rather quickly. The fire tower abuse made it incredibly annoying to know where to land, I would recommend you to trully cut the ammount of fire towers, and maybe angle them just a bit to make a better effect. There was a lack of decor at the beginning of the level too, and some enemy spam at the end. However, I did like the penguin cabin all destroyed.

Overall, it wasn't a good level. However, I can see some ideas and tricks not too bad executed. Just for that a 2/5 for you.

With love,

~lordpat