Super mario bros NES 1-1

[SonicSpeed1919]

Super mario bros NES 1-1
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[KABOOM]

The portal has way more than enough 1-1 remakes already.

I wanna see somebody do something different. Like 4-1. Or 8-4. Or MAYBE...an original level? (Gasp!)

[SonicSpeed1919]

The portal has way more than enough 1-1 remakes already.

I wanna see somebody do something different. Like 4-1. Or 8-4. Or MAYBE...an original level? (Gasp!)

i was thinking about doing the final level or a hard nes level,thank you for giving me those ideas,i will try to make 4-1 and 8-4. but what do you mean by original level? i thought 1-1 was an "original"level

[lordpat]

1-1 levels are the most overused concepts in the portal. It is not that they are bad, it just got really really old. Even tho it is using the LDer in an original way, it got used many many times. That is why it is not concidered original.

[1018peter]

Yep!So I tried SMB2's 1-1,Fresh idea maybe.

[SonicSpeed1919]

I would like to make up my own level series.but i dont know what it would be about but...i will think of something and i am new here so i did not know they made lots of super mario bros 1-1.

[lordpat]

As a fully personal recomendation, you should not start making a remake. Making a good remake series is very hard if you are a begginer. I would reccomend making a simple plattaformer or stuff (an ordinary jungle level, for example). Either way, it is up to you.

[SonicSpeed1919]

ok, i am going to make a new level soon,but i still want the level to be really cool.and lordpat i like your avatar or whatever it's call it

[Harmless]

Can't agree more when there has been way too many 1-1 remakes.

But as for the level itself...

I played through it, beat it much faster than I have beat the actual level in the original SMB. And it was because the clouds were not disabled. I literally skipped over half of the level just because of the clouds. Not saying you should remove them, but they need to be disabled. You can ask many level designing pros on how to disable things. Although I know you are new here, and don't know much about the SM63 coding system, I cannot overlook the fact that I just skipped over half of the level because of the clouds.

Graphics were shoddy and overused. And by overused I mean not much variety. You only have like two pieces of background decor on the floor out of 16 other things you could have used (and even then, what you did use sometimes floated above the ground by a few inches, which was not good). The castle could've been designed much better using windows instead of gray blocks, and a few other things to make it stand out. Also, having the interactive blocks as the ground was not a smart idea. I tried it before, did not look visually appealing.

And don't even get me started on the creativity of this level. I find a lot of remakes of original Super Mario levels horrifyingly bad, especially if they just copy it from the book. Unless if you have a lot of experience/know what you're doing with the level, I'd advise working on, as Kaboom stated, "original levels" of your own before working on remakes.

But overall, not bad for your first try. 1/5.

[lordpat]

Maybe you are beeing a touch too harsh and destructive, Harm. But hey, that is your form of judging

By the way, Harm, do not complain about originality. As a new commer he did not now that the portal was filled of that crap. A 1/5 is a bit too harsh. It means no effort or time into the level, I'm giving it a 2/5. But yeah, fix the clouds, this may help you:

viewtopic.php?f=15&t=148

(click on the first link XD)

It will allow items to be part of the background.