the platforms

[Mario63 levels]

the platforms
the level is medium

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250x30~0*28*52570*28*52570*28*52570*28*52570*27*5L5N570*27*5355570*27*5355570*27*5355570*27*5?5A*2*0*5955*5:5@*14*0*15*5257*14*0*15*5257*14*0*15*5257*14*0*15*5257*14*0*15*5257*14*0*15*5257*14*0*15*5257*14*0*15*5;5U*14*0*805*5>5@*4*0*25*5H57*4*0*24*5P5R57*4*0*24*5Q5S57*4*0*25*5257*4*0*25*5257*4*0*25*5257*4*0*25*5257*4*0*30*~1,50,780,0,0,Right|7,272,825,1,0,100,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,1,0,25|7,433,825,1,0,100,0,50,0,Left,none,0.5,1,0,25|7,593,825,1,0,100,0,0,0,Left,none,0.5,1,0,25|2,272,800|2,337,800|2,401,800|2,465,800|2,529,800|2,593,800|7,656,825,1,0,100,0,50,0,Right,none,0.5,1,0,25|2,657,800|2,720,800|2,784,800|7,815,825,1,0,100,0,0,0,Left,none,0.5,1,0,25|7,897,808,1,0,100,0,50,0,Right,none,0.5,2,0,25|7,1009,808,1,0,100,0,50,0,Right,none,0.5,1,0,25|8,1137,775,2,2,50,0,1|5,1135,684|2,1187,760|2,1084,760|2,1136,808|2,1135,711|7,1250,761,1,0,100,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,1,0,25|2,1249,736|2,1313,736|7,1410,761,1,0,100,0,50,0,Left,none,0.5,1,0,25|2,1376,736|2,1440,736|7,1472,761,1,0,100,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,1,0,25|2,1505,736|2,1569,736|7,1632,761,1,0,100,0,50,0,Left,none,0.5,1,0,25|2,1632,736|2,1696,736|7,1696,761,1,0,100,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,1,0,25|2,1760,735|5,1794,716|7,1871,745,1,0,100,0,50,0,Left,none,0.5,2,0,25|18,2016,748,0.5,0|7,2097,729,0,2,0,50,0,0,none,Up,0.5,1,0,25|141,2097,759,1,0|7,2098,593,0,2,0,50,0,25,none,Down,0.5,1,0,25|2,2098,688|2,2097,626|2,2096,559|141,2095,504,1,90|7,2209,554,2,0,50,0,0,0,Left,none,0.5,1,0,25|2,2130,531|2,2195,529|8,2320,550,-2,2,50,100,1|7,3747,456,1,0,120,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,1,0,25|7,3040,519,2,0,260,0,0,0,Left,none,0.5,2,0,25|2,2529,494|2,2592,494|2,2655,494|2,2719,494|2,2784,494|2,2848,494|2,2912,494|2,2977,494|2,3039,494|7,3121,489,2,0,260,0,220,0,Left,none,0.5,2,0,25|2,3121,463|2,3185,462|2,3248,462|2,3313,463|2,3378,463|2,3441,463|2,3505,463|2,3569,464|5,3568,428|28,3648,476,1,0|28,3680,476,1,0|28,2465,526,1,0|28,2432,526,1,0|8,3919,553,4,3,60,0,1|7,3920,456,1,0,120,0,60,0,Left,none,0.5,1,0,25|77,3919,553|7,4049,456,1,1,150,150,0,0,Right,Up,0.5,2,1,149|28,4272,316,1,0|2,3743,428|2,3809,428|2,3875,427|2,3936,427|2,4000,427|28,4307,316,1,0|8,4480,312,2,1,100,0,1|8,4481,312,2,1,100,30,1|8,4480,312,2,1,100,60,1|8,4480,312,2,1,100,90,1|8,4481,313,2,1,100,120,1|2,4456,281|2,4481,271|2,4508,282|2,4522,305|2,4515,331|2,4495,350|2,4468,350|2,4446,332|2,4443,303|5,4481,311|7,4624,232,6,2,200,40,0,0,Right,Up,0.5,2,1,200|2,4863,141|2,5087,205|2,5296,144|2,5589,208|2,5790,139|28,5826,189,1,0|28,5859,189,1,0|28,7652,765,1,0|6,7861,722|28,7619,765,1,0|28,7586,765,1,0|28,7554,765,1,0|32,6528,407,1,0|31,6960,467,1,0|32,7056,503,1,0|31,7009,552,1,0|33,7069,599,1,0|32,7141,651,1,0|31,7060,714,1,0|32,7135,750,1,0|2,6961,436|2,7061,477|2,7010,525|2,7067,565|2,7141,624|2,7137,720|2,7060,685|7,7217,776,1,0,150,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,2,0,25|2,7218,751|2,7281,751|2,7347,751|35,7440,776,1,0|2,7439,751|7,7505,809,1,0,100,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,2,0,25|5,7601,785|28,7520,765,1,0|25,5952,210|24,6048,242|27,6145,275|26,6242,305|25,6334,338|24,6432,370|2,5951,170|2,6049,207|2,6144,240|2,6241,271|2,6336,302|2,6432,335|2,6528,383|2,6640,431|2,6834,431|2,6770,431|2,6704,429|82,210,831~14~13~the%20platforms

[CedarBranch]

I see the effort. It is there.
This is a nice, simple platformer. There's cleverness in some portions (like the platform that goes up/down, speeding eastward while you get a coin at the point of each zig-zag.). I find this to be an average work, but may I suggest adding a bit more variety to your levels' arsenal. Tiles were only used at the beginning and the end and near-end (must I also point out that you only used grass tiles...? In space?). Green platforms seemed a little overused, yet cleverly excuted at times. Also, the Silver Stars were pointless, and the level was already straight-forward (still fun, though).
Overall, it was still an fun level and, please, keep providing the community with additional, enjoyable creations. Thanks for this one!

So long!

5.25/10 (3 Stars)

EDIT: So... found out you are a dow-- *cough* *faints* *awakes* *dies*