The Secret of the Star

[lucas s.c]

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[Harmless]

Don't have too much time, so I'll just put in a few notes instead of a full review.

I personally felt that the level needed to be longer. Also, it clearly needed more time to be worked on, for I felt like that a lot of the design (and the enemy placement) was incomplete. Or it could just be the serious lack of background decoration. Either way, not too bad of a level, I liked the concept of the ending, but I felt like you could've done something better than spam silver stars on the outside. I would say, for now, 2/5.