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This is my first level submission, just tell me what you think...

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Well,I'll guess I'll leave a review...This is my first review.


Fun-4.5/10. It's basically just platforming and finding the eight red coins.Not much to say.
Graphics-2.5/10. Not enough enemies and items,cutoff lava.Plain land.You can improve.
Other-3.5/10.You should put more effort into your levels.One shine sprite is enough,you don't need multiple ones just to make it brighter.Also.Items misplacement.Hold the Ctrl key to make the items "snap to the grid".You should also sometimes "mirror" the enemies.
There is no lag in the level.Good job.But you should set a proper background and suitable music.Or if you want to use not in-game music,link to the url via

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[url=URL here]Maybe saying "Music" here[/url]

Total-10.5/30. As I said,you can improve.I am willing to help you out in level designing,as I said in your welcome topic.If you persevere,you'll go far.Hope one day you'll become a level mod!