bowser took over

[koopa777]

bowser took over
my second level bowser took over the mushroom kingdom so you have to get the shine sprite to stop him difficulty 6/20

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[CedarBranch]

I was caught totally off guard! This level is actually decent compared to the (sub)title and description/plot, even though it's a bit short.

Goodities

• The decorations were well-suited with the plot. Taken by the intended atmosphere, the design is adequately accurate, even though it doesn't look great nor totally in-depth. This is actually average, but I do see great potential!
• Despite being a very short level, it shows enough effort to be appealed.
• The level displays a variety of platforming obstacles. It was enough to evade repetition.
• I also like the idea of things caught on fire. Not the best idea, but at least shows a bit of creativity.

Nards

• You should work on your grammar. The way you displayed it, it can be controversial in & hard to interpret(ation). I just used it intermediately.
• The plot is far too simple. I cannot see very much effort in it. Broaden your horizons!
• The third Sling Star has two issues, the latter being small. Its force is unnecessarily powerful in relation to the distance traveled. Try to adjusted the Star's strength so Mario doesn't hit the level's upper boundary, yet reaches the Tilting Log.
  The placement feels odd... It is hard to describe, but... well, um... the way you reach it... ... and the flame tower... never mind. Does anybody else feel it's unusual?
• Even though there is a variety of Sprites here, the tile usage seems unusual. There is no way to know why you used Red-Colored Bricks most of the time.

The remainder of the level is too unusual for me to evaluate.



Conclusion

An unexpectedly average level. Actually, in-between "average" & "almost above-average," yet unusually styled.
To your players, never judge a book by its cover.

3.225/5 > 3 Stars
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