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Posted: **December 31st, 2012, 4:49 pm**

Don't fall!!!!!!
THIS . . . IS . . . HARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: **December 31st, 2012, 8:16 pm**

I'm sorry, but there are very many design flaws that prevent this from being a good level. The "goomba bowling" barely works with giant goombas, there are multiple enemies placed on top of each other (which lags, by the way) along with enemies that serve no purpose at all, and enemies that you have to bounce off of to continue the level WHILE collecting red coins, extremely small falling platforms, and overall a lack of effort. Please attempt to put more effort into your levels instead of slapping out smaller ones.

Posted: **January 1st, 2013, 12:12 am**

GOOD points

-"sky" feeling
-platforming
-some decor(should add more)
-hidden FLUDD

BAD points
-fall from beginning
-lag because of the goombas[serious problem]
-doesn't have a variety of decor and enemies
-misplaced items[serious problem]
-signs were completely useless
-red coin near the hidden FLUDD
-red coin in the fall from the beginning
-flame towers near the shine sprite
-the level was too short
-large gap between the thwomp and the circle platform
-not much yellow coins
-too much goombas [serious problem]
-some decor was cutoff
-no items mirrored

Conclusion:You should really put more effort into your levels.

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