Frosty Spring Canyon

[GalaxyMaster382]

Frosty Spring Canyon
Attempt to make it to the other side of the canyon. Feel free to check out the glitched spring platforms in the editor.

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[Karyete]

Review

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Fun: 6/10

What you did well, you did VERY well. The springs worked well, and it was extremely dangerous. Unfortunately, it was a bit repetitive, and it wasn't very exciting after Level 1.
Perhaps adding a few enemies, like ParaKoopas, will spice up the level and make it more fun. The rotating platforms were extremely difficult to climb.

Graphics: 4/10
This level was extremely bare, although I can forgive you as there were only a few pieces of land in total. Even so, adding scenery and things like that would really make the level attractive to the eye. The good thing is, the land was neatly put together.

Other:
+No loading time! 1
+Springs worked well, and were all put in the right place. 1
-Too short. 0.5
-Was very repetitive. 0.5
-A bit bare and unattractive. 0.5

Overall: 10.5

Rank: Pro in training!