King Thwomp's Fortress

[seaserpent]

King Thwomp's Fortress
Bowser has sent his REALLY BIG Thwomp to take over Whomp's Fortress. Complete with MOVING THWOMPS, TREADMILL WATER (This was a surprise!!!), and REALLY FAST THWOMPS, King Thwomp's Fortress is really difficult. Course 2 of the Super Mario 82 series. Course 1 is Bowser Battlefield.

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[Brand-MC]

This was an ok level. You should probably add more obstacles instead of just thwomps and fire. There should also be more design instead of just green brick. The level is also short, maybe you can make it longer. Hope this helps you make it better.

[seaserpent]

Thanks for the feedback! I posted this 2 minuets ago, and I get a reply. WOW! In SM64DS, there is 15 levels, and 3 bowser traps, so I will use this info to make Frosty Bully Bay, my next course based off of Jolly Rancher Bay. PM me if you like!

seaserpent

[KABOOM]

WTF was up with the first part? You can't even move or jump because of the Big Bullies attacking you, and continuing the level pretty much comes down to whether the game feels like pushing you through the pipe or just plain killing you. And the rest of the level wasn't much better; did you even look at the water when playing the level? The water is higher in the actual level than it appears when designing, but apparently you either didn't notice or just ignored it. That's not to say the level was entirely without merit; if you improved that first part and improved the graphics, this level would be much better. For now though, it gets a two-star rating.