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Snow-Island

PostPosted: January 9th, 2013, 5:58 am
by blueMario2000
Snow-Island
Its my 3 level i hope you have fun

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Re: Snow-Island

PostPosted: January 9th, 2013, 6:35 am
by Dtroid
Review

Fun-7/10.The level had good platforming and some enemies(more of those!),however I dislike the lack of coins and the "earthquake" at the last part.
-I like the silver stars.

Graphics-6/10.The level had nice decor.And I really liked the water at the beginning.
-Coins.They are counted as decor but are not added in the level.:<
-At the last part,you can actually zoom out and see the metal star and the white wall.You should try to fix that.

Other-5/10.
-Good music choice.
-That earthquake :<
-If you want to put flipping platforms to block the path,set one of those at negative speed.This will make it turn the reverse direction.

Notes-You should put more effort into your levels.Keep practising and don't give up! ;)

Re: Snow-Island

PostPosted: January 9th, 2013, 11:46 am
by KABOOM
At the level transitions, you need the walls to be at least two tiles deep so we can't pass through them. Otherwise I think it's pretty good.