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Paper Mario 65 Ch.5-3
Mario is now in Armageddons airship.Can Mario steal the star without Armageddon even notice?

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Come on. I'm now begging you, it's clear you didn't follow my advice on testing your levels... you need to think about the audience and how they will enjoy it. Clearly lag is the opposite for us said audience. You have too many bullet bills, causing a major drop in FPS (thankfully my computer is not a crappy Windows 98 or something like that, but if it was, that would be a major problem). All you really had for us was goombas, a big bully, one or two shy guys, and a bob-omb. And the airship was really, really, REALLY short. Not even worth playing. The storyline was pretty stale as well, nothing exciting. And you used very, very negligible decor and three different tiles! C'mon, I know you are better than that. 1/5 stars pretty much sums this up.