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My First Level

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Postby crabbatle » January 11th, 2013, 10:08 pm

My First Level
This is the first level I've made. :)

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Re: My First Level

Postby debu03 » January 14th, 2013, 5:27 am

Oh well, Good try.I it is a little boring but you have a good try to make your first level.It is a little boring because it is your First Level.Keep it up! :)
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Re: My First Level

Postby BCB9614 » January 14th, 2013, 5:30 pm

It's a decent start, but the level is a bit too short. Try expanding the playfield, throwing in some enemies, and adding more red coins. Even some game music can help lift this level off the ground. You can even try experimenting with some items to see what puts on the most entertaining effect for you. There is a way to unlock everything in the level designer if you don't want to hassle through the game, but it's up to you whether you want to use it or not.

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Re: My First Level

Postby SuperMIC » January 18th, 2013, 6:51 pm

For a first level it's definitely above average! Hey it was short but the gameplay was smooth and flowed well. There was zero cut-off and the decor enhanced the breezy feel of the level.

I liked it.

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Re: My First Level

Postby crabbatle » January 19th, 2013, 9:46 am

BCB9614 wrote:It's a decent start, but the level is a bit too short. Try expanding the playfield, throwing in some enemies, and adding more red coins. Even some game music can help lift this level off the ground. You can even try experimenting with some items to see what puts on the most entertaining effect for you. There is a way to unlock everything in the level designer if you don't want to hassle through the game, but it's up to you whether you want to use it or not.

Thanks, I took your advise and just finished my second level.

SuperMIC wrote:For a first level it's definitely above average! Hey it was short but the gameplay was smooth and flowed well. There was zero cut-off and the decor enhanced the breezy feel of the level.

I liked it.

4/5

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