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Fantasy Forest Ilex

PostPosted: May 24th, 2013, 2:10 pm
by Cordelia
Fantasy Forest Ilex
I put a lot of efforts into the detail and graphics. It's a little short, but I hope I'm getting better at this. Feedback is much appreciated.

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Re: Fantasy Forest Ilex

PostPosted: May 25th, 2013, 6:37 am
by ~MP3 Amplifier~
I won't say too much, just thought it would be nice for the first time in ages to comment on a level instead of play them silently.

Well, your graphics have improved a loooot from the last level I played of yours, well done. But the gameplay is lacking a bit, it's mostly wooden platforms and grass tiles and it just doesn't feel like you've used enough, so it wasn't really as fun as I'd hoped to play.

Graphics wise I still think the tiling needs improvement and maybe a little less repetition of those bushy tall trees (then again they are the branches soo) and some spots were a bit emptier than others, but overall, it was a nice effort.