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The Temple Of Sun
My first level. Quite short but I hope you'll enjoy.

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Well, as a Veteran Level Designer, I must say I am quite impressed by the quality of your first level, hence the quick review. It was indeed a bit short, but a really good try at the Level Designer. The graphics were excellent and the level was quite fun to play, and looks like a level I could see in a Level Designer Contest. I enjoyed this and you deserve a 5/5 for that first level. There is nothing bad to say here.

Please keep up the good work.

The only things I have against this level is having FLUDD in it. It kinda ruins the purpose of having platforms or worrying about the quicksand, which by the way, I found awkward how it was above the start of the level and not in its own section. Like Star king said, you handled the graphics well, and I think this is a good first level you made. Keep it up.