Lost.

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Lost.
Mario has fallen. Fallen into a night world. He can see a glow in the distance. However, he lost a shine sprite he was told to keep. He did not know what happened, so he went searching a way out. Yes, this is the only level I'm submitting today! Scroll down for something new.

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The level quality is expected to be above low quality at all times.

NEW!
Since other users used custom music, I decided to give it a try. Not sure if there is a requirement to do this.
Try muting the background music and play this remix!
OC Remix Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask 'Inverting the Tower Temple' [Rockvale Temple (Out)]

More Mario music-ish? Try this:
Mushroom Peaks (Custom Track) - Mario Kart Wii Music Extended
Its a remix of Geno's Forest if you're unsure!

I didn't make nor own those videos.

[GMDragon11]

Since I have seen lots of people ignore your levels and you're new here, I decided to give you a review on your level Lost.

FUN: 7.5/10
Your level started of kinda easy at the beginning. It had some decent platformering parts, but too easy. At the end it started to get funner. You could of got an higher score if the level stay like that the ENTIRE level.


GRAPHICS: 4/5
It's hard to find lots of people that are new who make levels with graphics like these. I was extremely impressed on this level's design. But at the end it started to fade away, like I was playing something another level. That's the only weak spot here.


OTHER: 3.25/5
+1 GLITCHES!(i mean the disabled level transition to make the level go with the theme.)
+0.5 No lag! yay.......
+0.25 Nice simple level. Not boring.
-0.5 Useless sign about you not knowing to use cool fonts.
-1 Floating colck platform looks kinda ugly.




TOTAL: 14.75/20 ------> B+

For a person who is new here, I was pretty impressed. Keep it up and you can become a great Level Designer one day.

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For a person who is new here, I was pretty impressed. Keep it up and you can become a great Level Designer one day.

Wow, you're nice. Thanks for feedback! I can improve my levels more!
If you want to know about my experience, I've been working on levels for like 2 years now and I got more experience! Also, this site gave me inspiration!

I had some lost old levels because my old 8GB USB broke so I lost some good old classics!

Yeah! I know about the end; I was working on that at late night and wanted to go to bed. I rushed actually. I shouldn't do that.

Once again, thanks for the feedback!

[koopa777]

I had some fun on this level. It wasn't laggy and it had some fun platforming at the end. nice level

Scores

Fun:3.75/5 (the first part was too easy but got harder)
Lag:5/5 (no lag at all)
Music Choice:5/5
Background Items:4/5 (those vines are not necessary)

Overall: 5+5+4+3.75=17.75
17.75/20=4.75
4.75=5

Excellent for beginner

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Excellent for beginner

I'm not a beginner. I'm a newcomer who designed levels for 2 years XD

Hm... I should make another special level, but thats for the 25'th LDC!

[SonicMarioJryGX]

I've got to say, THIS IS A GREAT WORK!
Specially when you are a beginner (Sort of) in level creating matter!
The level was very well acclimated and overall, is very well detailed and well done!

Fun: 4.5
- The beginning of the level was kind of dull since there wasn't much platform, at the end it started to get fun.

Looks: 4.9
- Most of the level was pretty well detailed! The only downside is nearby that "These vines are solid!" sign, you can see clearly there are bone platforms, next time try to use snow platforms or metal platform since they are thinner!

In-Game: 4.5
- The gameplay was good, not any lag and the starting crash was awesome, still... was kind of anti-climatic that some sign talked toward Mario (i.e. "Mario was alone, or was he?") and other ones like try to break the 4th wall or just deviate completely from the storytelling (i.e. "You don't want to fall", "These vines are solid!").

Difficulty: 5.0
- The difficulty was completely fair and balanced, less that fire tower corridor with (i believe) 4 downward and the last one upwards in which double jump was needed to land on that huge Goomba, but is just a small bit of unfairness that doesn't matter.

5.0= Wonderful
4.6 - 4.9= Excellent ◄◄ YOU ARE HERE
4.1 - 4.5= Very Good
3.6 - 4.0= Good
3.1 - 3.5= Optimal
2.6 - 3.0= Improvable
2.1 - 2.5= Bad
1.6 - 2.0= Very Bad
1.1 - 1.5= Atrocious
0.6 - 1.0= Miserable
0.1 - 0.5= Depressing
OVER-ALL: 4.7= EXCELLENT WORK
Amazing level design! Keep up the good work and you will become even better!

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Good review template, SonicMarioJryGX. I do know the strange layering glitch. Thats why my levels have unintended secrets (the E.E. glitch A.K.A. Evil Eraser.)