the ice cliff

[Player7972]

the ice cliff
just play

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[koopa777]

You're level was great for a beginner. it was short but sorta fun.

Fun:3/5 (all it was is easy platforms with some fludd still kinda fun)
Lag:5/5 (no lag)
Music Choice:0/5 (bowser's castle music really dude really)
Background Items And Overall look:0/5 (didn't look good)

Overall 3+5=7
7/20=2
First Level Bonus 2+0.75=2.75
2.75=3 Stars

I think you should spend more time on making you're levels for example put 1-ups and background items trees,bushes,rocks,ect.