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Mario's Bar Adventure

PostPosted: July 10th, 2013, 10:33 am
by ThePerfectRun
Mario's Bar Adventure
After a fun night at the bar, Mario passes out. At nearly 2 AM, however, he wakes up and needs to get home. It is your duty to guide this plumber home, player!
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Re: Mario's Bar Adventure

PostPosted: July 10th, 2013, 4:23 pm
by blue
Anyways, are you sure this is suitable for young audiences xD (funny title)? Also, there are like, barely any coins. Yellow coins, plants at the beginning (bush and cactuses) will help you become a great level designer like me in no time!


I honestly think the spinning triangles look a little ugly in the black sky, but thats just me. I think that you could've made the level use more tiles to make it look like it wasn't rushed, so I can have a perfect run at this.

Thats my honest feedback! I actually enjoyed the part where the sling star launches you fast to the snowy isles.

Edit: Perfect Run was intended! :)

Re: Mario's Bar Adventure

PostPosted: July 10th, 2013, 5:03 pm
by ThePerfectRun
theendlessjourney012 wrote:...Are you sure this is suitable for young audiences xD (funny title)?


Yes, I'm completely sure. At least we don't see him actually drunk. And by the way, thanks for the suggestions! I'll continue my level-making.

Lol, you said perfect run. Yes, I know that wasn't intended.

Re: Mario's Bar Adventure

PostPosted: July 11th, 2013, 7:01 pm
by Agent1_Firevolt
I just tried it...and I think you could improve as well.
1. Try implementing a background.
2. Try placing a bit more scenery around the place.
3. Try adding a few coins and things.
4. Try and add some more enemies.
Other than that, the game is fairly good...and I like how some people use signs to express one's speech.
Pretty good, for a basic level.

Re: Mario's Bar Adventure

PostPosted: July 14th, 2013, 4:55 am
by TestMario
Hum... a graeat game !