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Mario Adventure: Part 1
Part I: The first Shine
--The king Shine needs Mario's help to recover the shine and take them back to the king Shine before it falls on evil hands of Bowser.--
Mission: king Shine tells Mario that a shine was somewhere hidden into a forest nearby the Mushroom Kingdom, but Bowser's evil minions have already gathered it and implanted several security measures in the forest so no-one can get the shine before Bowser does.
¡Open your way through the forest and Bowser minions and get back the Shine Sprite!

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Honestly, I was very impressed. It had great graphics and a good amount of difficulty, which are the keys to a great level. But it could of been better. And the part where the bullet bill bases are floating looks wrong. Atleast put a tile under it. Other than that, it was a great start to a great series. 4.5/5 ----> 5/5

Well, thanks a lot for your review!
Still, there is something i didn't really liked about my own level...
So, right now, "Mario's Adventure: Part 1" is going to be Re-released as "Mario's Adventure: Pt. 1: Duty"
Would be pretty helpful if the people tell which one is better.
And i previously did a small saga that was "Mario's Story", so basically, this is like the remade version.