Warship Mania!

[GMDragon11]

Warship Mania!
A short, but a bit difficult level made by yours truly, GMDragon11. I'm trying to make hard levels nowdays, so constructive criticism is appreciated.
RANKS:
S RANK: Get all 1-ups and complete level and in less then a minute and half.
A RANK: Get all 1-ups and complete level.
B RANK: Get at least one 1-up and complete level.
C RANK: Complete level.
Enjoy!
And yes, I did get the ranks idea from Sonic games.

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[SonicMarioJryGX]

A rank, Nice and fun level! :3

[GMDragon11]

Thanks!

[CedarBranch]

Not recording my rank yet, but this level was pretty nice. I cannot really describe any pros and cons, but everything seemed acceptable and enjoyable.

Strong recommendation: Replace the S Rank's requirement with "beating the level with all 1-ups and not taking any damage."
Reason: If I really wanted the S Rank, but died once, I would be required to kill myself in real life, then reincarnate so I could get another chance. That isn't fair, so please consider my request; this is why I'm not recording my Rank yet - there'd be no point in trying harder if I cannot get rewarded for doing any better.

[GMDragon11]

If I really wanted the S Rank, but died once, I would be required to kill myself in real life, then reincarnate so I could get another chance

I don't really understand, if you die once, you try maybe another time. Maybe in two hours or so. But I should maybe make the objective to complete the level and get all the 1-ups in 2 minutes, or is that too long?