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clouded sky galaxy

PostPosted: August 2nd, 2013, 2:29 am
by minikrash
clouded sky galaxy
the 4th galaxy made by me next galaxy is called: goomtropolis galaxy

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Re: clouded sky galaxy

PostPosted: August 6th, 2013, 12:32 pm
by Purple Coin
This level makes no sense. 0/10

Re: clouded sky galaxy

PostPosted: August 6th, 2013, 12:58 pm
by CedarBranch
At least tell why. You aren't helping at all.



This level was not tested very thoroughly. Make sure it is plausibly beatable.

Also, avoid cut-off. Cut-off is RARELY good-looking (forming tile art may be a different story.), so try filling it in with wall/ceiling/corner/floor/half tiles.

You should also make sure that your level has at least a theme. This is too small and bare to be called a "galaxy," so it is not a galaxy.


0.03 -> 1/5 Stars. You have a lot to work on.

Re: clouded sky galaxy

PostPosted: August 7th, 2013, 8:39 pm
by Pwner52746
fix the respawn point with the door and also make it a bit more appealing to the eye