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shine coin

PostPosted: October 6th, 2013, 11:18 am
by larryboy1010
shine coin
welcome to the the new bunch of levels called shine coin these are short but hard and fun levels. there is no F.L.U.D.D. just platforming.

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Re: shine coin

PostPosted: October 7th, 2013, 10:03 am
by Konradix
This level is pretty empty... I assume this was supposed to be some sort of secret level? Well, it is just too empty. In the first section there is just a little tiled platform and randomly placed blocks and platforms. If you were going for the cave feel, you could've added a ceiling to show how large it really is. There is also little decorations throughout the level. It would really help to add some flowers etc. It would also help to tie in, seemingly, random blocks logs and platforms placed. Also the cutoff. Not that you have a lot of tiles here, but the tiles that you have have cutoff. Next are the cannon shootouts. While they're ok puzzle/challenge, it's not fun if you're going to die after a missed shot. Also they're randomly placed which looks even worse. And finally, why all the coins at the end? It was supposed to be a Shine made of coins, but you don't need this much spam >.>

Platforming was ok, easy for the most part, but sometimes unfair (see cannons). The level wasn't that great. Try to follow my advices and your next level will be much better ;)

2/5