Nivel 1-5

[bizcocho]

Nivel 1-5
Mario must collect ten red coins in the jungle

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[CedarBranch]

Words of advice: Avoid spamming things (AKA overusing them) and tile & item cut-off. Also try to make the level fair + give the player an idea of what to do, and please use (understandable) English throughout the entire level.

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The level was alright. It wasn't good, neither was it terrible. There are several issues (mainly what was mentioned in my advice) that bring the level's quality down, but this could still be enjoyed by some. Personally, I wasn't attracted to this. Too many things need working out, but it doesn't necessarily make this a bad level. You do show potential for improvement, but it seems you may require some assistance in your case due to the severity of the issues (it would probably be a difficult road to take if you tried to fix all of this on your own.).

I'll give this a 2.25/5. (2 stars)

[marionluigi143]

5 out of 5 for Score, 2 out of 5 for Difficulty, (5+2)/2 out of 5 > 3 out of 5 for Overall (Sorry I had to round it down for some reason)