Transform Grassland

[CakedMario120]

Transform Grassland
From the Grass,Lava and Sky Kingdom! Travel all this 3 kingdoms and find the hidden 10 red coins~

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[CedarBranch]

After a lot of thought, I still find it hard to point out anything really worth mentioning. I would expect more than this, and it was hard to decide whether approving or disapproving this would be the best idea, but I can see the effort even though this level is too short. I would also like to see others give some feedback too, and others' points of view could help more, but I myself am having a difficult time reviewing this level, so I'll approve this just in case.
Sorry I couldn't be much of help this time around...

[~Yuri]

Ok,I'll review this.

Actually it's like JJJ said, it's not that bad, it's just a little messy, but I think there's nothing wrong in approving this. The gameplay is not horrible, I just don't like the forced damage to get one of the red coins, and I think it's much linear, it's almost only jumping, and this is boring. About the graphics, well, I think they are just, strange. You start in jungle, with a house and castle bricks, actually this is okay, but then you arrives in a lava land, that just appeared from the nothing? And the worst mistake, is that you also put sky along with lava, that is just non-sense. Maybe if you change the order like grass->sky->lava would make a bit more of sense. Increasing the level size and using level transitions helps a lot in these situations.

I think if you follow my advices you can get better with level designing. Sorry, don't know if this is downrating, but I'm giving this a 2/5.

[CedarBranch]

Ok,I'll review this.

Actually it's like JJJ said, it's not that bad, it's just a little messy, but I think there's nothing wrong in approving this. The gameplay is not horrible, I just don't like the forced damage to get one of the red coins, and I think it's much linear, it's almost only jumping, and this is boring. About the graphics, well, I think they are just, strange. You start in jungle, with a house and castle bricks, actually this is okay, but then you arrives in a lava land, that just appeared from the nothing? And the worst mistake, is that you also put sky along with lava, that is just non-sense. Maybe if you change the order like grass->sky->lava would make a bit more of sense. Increasing the level size and using level transitions helps a lot in these situations.

I think if you follow my advices you can get better with level designing. Sorry, don't know if this is downrating, but I'm giving this a 2/5.

As long as you give a fair, realistic review/rating (with backup for your reasoning), it shouldn't be considered over or downrating.
And I find a two-out-of-five to be fair in this case, especially as your review has sent the right message.