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Lacarno

PostPosted: December 26th, 2013, 3:52 pm
by -BY
Lacarno
Gonna sneak some of my recent levels into the portal. Got apparently 3rd in the 25th squared contest.
Reviews/Comments are appreciated as always. : )


Music theme: http://www.listenonrepeat.com/watch/?v=-edh9AV4Esk

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Re: Lacarno

PostPosted: December 26th, 2013, 6:24 pm
by ~Yuri
I remember that I was going to use a carnival themed level for this LDC. And then you posted this. Screw you :3

Anyway, for the review:

This level concept is very similar to the level you used for the 1st 25quared contest, you need to talk to people or complete a quiz in order to get a coin. Very good. But there are some diferences betwen this and the other, looks like you paid a bit more of attention to the platforming in this one, even if it's not that challenging. The platforming even being simple is actually fun. Not any bug or glitch to point out.

The graphics were good. While there are more graphics in some parts than in others, it's still pretty good, the floor was amazing, and with these coins spread everywhere you really gave a carnival fell. the decoration while it wasn't so amazing, was pretty neat, these trees fitted well with the whole atmosphere. Well done.

Overall: 3.75/5 -> 4/5 Very good with a very neat concept, but nothing so challenging or surprising. Maybe you could do some level with the same concept, but bigger.

Re: Lacarno

PostPosted: December 26th, 2013, 7:17 pm
by Harmless
yurimaster09 wrote:This level concept is very similar to the level you used for the 25quared contest, you need to talk to people or complete a quiz in order to get a coin.

This is his 25quared entry, lel.

Re: Lacarno

PostPosted: December 26th, 2013, 7:19 pm
by ~Yuri
you mean 2nd 25quared entry? :P

Re: Lacarno

PostPosted: December 27th, 2013, 1:40 pm
by Harmless
well, yes

Anyway, I thought it was a really great use of space for what little you had to work with. I didn't really see any bugs or unintentional glitches anywhere, so nice job. :3