Mushroom Area

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Mushroom Area
A level that has a bit of challenge in it!

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[CedarBranch]

I'm a little exhausted, so I'll give you a quick review for now.

Fun 1.2/10
There is nearly nothing to do here, especially being so short. Next time, try to make things a little more interesting and focus more on platforming. This was quite a letdown.

Graphics 1.5/5
There are some things to see, but it is all too plain. Nothing catches the eye, but there is a little bit of decoration. A little bit. Also, avoid cutoff.

Other 2.375/5
-.25 for cutoff so easy to avoid.
-.5 for what appears to be a lack of effort in the design.
-.125 for slight enemy overuse and floating, pointless sprites.
+.25 for no lag or loading time.

Overall 5.075/20 (1.26875 --> 1/5 Stars)
This level wasn't very good at all, but it does not mean your future is grim. Be wary of cutoff and focus on making your levels more interesting, graphically and fun-wise. Also try making your levels longer.